Writing dedications

A dedication is a note at the beginning saying for whom the book was written. Think of dedications as being in honor of someone (or something). The dedication doesn’t have to be specifically related to the book; think of the dedication as a gift and the book is just the means of conveying it.

Who do you dedicate the book to? Think about who inspired you, who is important in your life, or who you’d like to make happy. You can dedicate it to a single person, to several people, a group of people, an organization, or even an idea. If there are multiple authors on a book, each author gets a dedication.

Dedications can be a great way of showing that you’ve made it to a point: for example, a dear friend of mine wrote a book about something I kept trying to tell him about years before. He had a dedication to me that said “And to my old friend, John, who kept trying to tell me about this when we were in high school–I got it, John, I finally got it!”

The dedication can be something as simple as “To [name of significant other]” or something a good deal longer. I dedicated an early book to my father, the history professor, and had several sentences of text about why I am so pleased to be his son.

Dedications (and acknowledgments) can be fun. One of my favorites was a friend’s dedication to his wife: “To Jill, without whom I would still be impossible.” It should probably also be pointed out that punctuation and structure are incredibly important in dedications. The best example of this was the following nugget resulting from the omission of a serial comma: “To my parents, God and Ayn Rand.”

I’ve dedicated books for wedding gifts, to friends on the occasion of the birth of their first child, to my high school graduating class, and in honor of the retirement of someone who was instrumental in getting me started in the writing biz. I’ve dedicated two books to significant others, but, oddly enough, both relationships broke up not long after. I am very keen on the woman I’m now married to, so I’m not planning on dedicating a book to her, ever.

Dedications and acknowledgments

Writing a book is a huge undertaking that never happens on its own. However, judging by the current crop of technical books, many authors are unaware of the value of dedications and acknowledgments… which is a real shame. As writers, we have a particularly large audience, and an exceptional ability to thank people for the help they have given us. People appreciate being remembered and having their contributions acknowledged publicly. This short series of posts will describe dedications and acknowledgments and give you some tips on how to use them.

Final thoughts on documentation plans

A good documentation plan actually serves two purposes:

  • First, you use the documentation plan to sell your book idea to a publisher. It shows the publisher that you know what you’re doing, that you have a good understanding on what you want to write, who you’re writing it for, and how you’re going to do it. The documentation plan gives the publisher enough information about how you perceive the project that they can see how it fits with their plans and schedule.
  • Second, the documentation plan is a roadmap for you during the project so you don’t wander off in the wrong direction. I can recall many cases where I would go back to my detailed outline and remind myself that I didn’t have to write something quite yet; that that was something for a later chapter.

In addition, if you’re using the documentation plan as a freelance writer, it can serve as a negotiation tool and as a contractual statement of work. Similarly, if you’re a captive writer working for a company, the documentation plan scopes what you’re doing for a project and identifies your responsibilities.

However you use a documentation plan, it’s a living document that needs to be updated regularly. Changes to the documentation plan, which are usually in the outline, should be logged and the documentation plan re-released to the people you’re working with so they know what’s going on.

The biggest underlying advantage to the documentation plan is that it will make you look like you know what you’re doing. And if you have a complete documentation plan template, you will!

Documentation plans–a downloadable template

Now that you’ve read my description of what goes into a documentation plan, you can download a blank version of the format I use to see one way in which you can put all of this together. Most of the comments in the individual posts are in the documentation plan. In some cases, I’ve added samples from a real book proposal. As I’ve said, this format works well for both book proposals and for technical writing projects with very minor adjustments.

Regardless of whether you use my format or build your own, I encourage you to use a standard documentation plan template. As you identify the elements you want to use in your documentation plans, you can tailor the template to your needs.

The advantages of using a standardized template are that you get used to the types of information you need to supply as well as being able to create a documentation plan quickly and easily. In addition, if you have all the topics in your template, you won’t miss anything that should be there. This template has everything I’ve been able to think of that I’d ever need. To create a complete plan, I just run down the items in the template. When everything’s filled in, the proposal’s ready to send out. (By the way, if you find that you’ve added something to this, please let me know. I’m always interested in ways to update my template.)

Documentation plans–Appendixes

There are three appendixes that typically show up in my documentation plans:

  • Author resume
  • Audience analysis
  • Terms of agreement

The author resume appendix is just that: it’s your resume. You’ll include this whenever you’re using the documentation plan to pitch a job: freelance documentation contract, a book with a publisher you’ve never worked with before who needs to be sold on your qualifications, or your response to an RFP. If you include this, have a cross-reference in the Overview section where you mention the author names so they know to look at this appendix to see your resume and thereby appreciate you more.

The audience analysis appendix is an expansion of the basic audience information that appears in the Overview. There’s a lot of stuff you might put in this section, including personas, audience surveys that profile the readers, or even marketing info (although when I’ve got that much marketing information, I usually build a separate appendix for marketing info).

The terms of agreement appendix is only used when you’re using the documentation plan as the primary statement of work (SOW) for a freelance writing contract. For the terms section, you’ll put the responsibilities and assumptions from the overview, the description of deliverables from the production information section, and any conditions for renegotiation.

Documentation plans–Detailed outline

The detailed outline is an outline done as deeply as you can. Chapter titles and three levels of heads within each chapter are par, but I’ve had a few cases where I wanted to go deeper (and did). The more detail you can get into your outline up front, the better estimates you can make and the clearer picture you’ll have of what’s in the book.

List everything in the detailed outline, including every bit of front matter, chapters, appendixes, glossary, index, coupons and ads for the back of the book, and possibly even back cover text.

Use heading styles for your headings, because you can then collapse and expand levels in Word, reorganize, and change your style formatting quickly if you need to.

Put descriptive comments for most headings. Each chapter should have a sentence or two describing what the chapter is about, as should each major heading in the chapter. I use a Heading 7 style for that’s been indented two inches and is in a small font. I could use a text style for this purpose, I’m sure, but I just have gotten used to this over the years.

If you have multiple authors or contributors, each chapter heading should list the name of the person writing the chapter in [brackets]. If a different person is writing an individual section within a chapter, put their name in [brackets] next to the relevant heading. If you have a lot of source material experts involved with the project, you may also want to list their names next to the appropriate chapter titles or heading levels.

The detailed outline is a living document that will change over the course of a project. On my first book, I used the outline as part of my completion ritual: each time I finished a chapter, I replaced the chapter’s outline as I’d planned it with the outline of the actual chapter I was submitting. The actual chapter was certainly more detailed than what I’d scoped out, but it was interesting to see the variance between the two. If you end up with a 75% overlap between what you planned and what you wrote, you’re doing well.

Documentation plans–Schedule

The schedule section answers the “When?” questions.

Enter the project schedule here. Have as many benchmarks as possible. You may take this down to the “Chapter 1 out for 1st review/Chapter 1 back from 1st review/Chapter 1 out for 2nd review…” level if you wish, but in my experience, it’s not desirable to be that detailed because any time there’s a single slip, you have to recalculate everything. On the other hand, if you’re doing something with multiple contributors, it’s a very good idea to track the individual pieces they’re doing so they don’t get lost in the shuffle. (In a case like that, I might suggest having a medium-detailed schedule here and then use a spreadsheet during the project to track the specifics for each person.)

For the purposes of a documentation plan, though, a two-column or three-column table of phases and dates is quite adequate. Be sure to include the project start, the production dates, printing dates, and the like in the schedule. You may have other benchmarks for an ebook, a print-on-demand book, or a CD/DVD that’s included with the book, such as preparation of master files, approvals, reviews, and release to the duplicator or distributor.

If you have no other dates lined up, you might use the following list as a baseline and take it from there as the project requires:

  • Writing start
  • Handoff of initial TOC and first chapter.
  • 25% ms. complete mark.
  • 50% ms. complete mark.
  • 75% ms. complete mark.
  • 100% ms. complete mark.
  • Production and page proofs complete; book to printer.

At the end of the schedule, always include the following statement: it’s a good, general-purpose escape clause.

Note: This schedule assumes that the scope, purpose, and outline in this documentation plan are substantially correct, and that no time will be lost due to sickness or other delays. Any changes to these assumptions will result in a comparable, day-for-day extension of the schedule.

In other words, if they’re late, you’ll be late, too; it’s not your job to make up the slack for their lack of process. If you manage to sell this to management effectively, be sure to tell me how you did it.

Documentation plans–Staffing

The staffing section answers the “Who?” questions.

Several tips about this section:

  • When you have lists of names, such as for reviewers or testers, list people in alpha order so it’s clear you’re not making a judgment on their relative worth to the project.
  • Names can and frequently do appear in more than one section. Someone responsible for approval is certainly also going to be a reviewer, possibly a tester, probably a source material expert. The project editor may also be the copy editor, the proofreader, and the production coordinator.
  • If you have a lot of names in a section, consider building a table to show who’s doing what.

Author(s) Enter the names of all the authors and contributors and the chapters/sections they’re responsible for. If you have a lot of authors, make a table.

Project Editor Who’s coordinating the editing? This is the person you’re going to be dealing with at the publisher, so they’ll tell you who it is.

Copy Editor Who’s doing the copyediting? Usually determined by the publisher.

Proofreader Who’s doing the proofreading? Usually determined by the publisher.

Indexer Who’s doing the indexing? Usually determined by the publisher.

Designer Who is designing the book? Always determined by the publisher.

Production Coordinator Who’s coordinating the production?

Layout Will there be a special layout person? Usually determined by the publisher. If you’re responsible for layout, put your name here.

Art Coordinator Who’s coordinating any outside art issues? Always determined by the publisher.

Graphic Artist Who is doing the graphics? (Depending on the project, you may also have an illustrator or photographer.) Usually determined by the publisher.

Source Material Experts Depending on the project, you may want to identify your source material experts up front so they can budget their time. This can also be done as part of the detailed outline, listing the SMEs for each chapter or section.

Reviewers For books, the publisher will frequently identify someone as an outside reviewer, but most are willing to look at people you suggest. For a document, you’ll want to pick the internal reviewers based on who has a hand in the thing you’re writing about. If possible, get reviewers for overall content and style, technical accuracy, and standards and format. Reviewers can appear in more than one category.

Testers Enter the names of the people who will be testing what you’re writing. Not everything requires testing, of course, but a lot more requires testing than you might think. For example, everything in any how-to/DIY book on any subject needs to be tested. There have been cookbooks that weren’t 100% tested that had errors in the recipes that made them unusable (and really unpleasant).

Individuals Responsible for Approval You may not need this section for a book, but you will if this documentation plan is for a technical manual. Enter the one and only name in each category who is the final signoff authority for each type of review (as described under Reviewers). Never let yourself be approved by a committee; your spleen will implode during the process.

Instructors If this is a project for a specific group of instructors, you may want to list the instructors by name here.

Documentation plans–Production information

The production information section answers the “How?” questions.

What are the project deliverables? Give a brief description of the deliverables. The details for the deliverables are listed below, but if you say “1 printed manual and 1 companion CD of software,” the client can’t come back and say “Where’s the website that was supposed to be part of this?”

What are the writing and editing standards for the document? I use a boilerplate sentence that says “This book will follow the standards stated in the Chicago Manual of Style as well as any style considerations of [publisher’s/client’s] style manual.” You may prefer a different style guide, but this lets you nail down the final authority on the subject.

What format(s) will this document be available in? Identify the size and format for the finished product, such as standard 7-3/8″ by 9-1/4″ perfectbound trade paperback, 3-ring 8-1/2 x 11″, Kindle-formatted ebook, or whatever.

How many pages will this book/document have? Give a page estimate based on your outline. If you’re writing a manual for something, you may not have a limit on the number of pages you can have, but most books have specific page counts that they have to meet. For example, when I was coauthoring “The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Disaster Preparedness,”, the book had to be between within one signature of their typical page length. (We ended up cutting two chapters from the book to meet the page length, as a matter of fact.)

Even if you don’t have hard and fast limits on the size of a book or document, estimating the book’s size is an important statistic for estimating the time necessary for production, costs, and so on.

Are there special art requirements? “Art” is anything that isn’t text. It can be screen captures, conceptual art, sketches, line drawings, illustrations, photos (both B&W and color), or (if you’re doing something online) JPGs, GIFs, and videos. You may not have to do these yourself, but you’ll definitely need to identify what goes where.

What will the layout be? Most publishers have the layout predetermined to meet their stylistic considerations, but if there’s something you want for this book, mention it.

What kind of typesetting will there be? Again, typesetting is usually up to the publisher (although you’re expected to code and format your manuscript files appropriately). But if the answer here is only “Using Microsoft Word 2007,” you should identify this. If there are standard templates, mention those as well.

Will there be any layout requirements? This is usually handled by the publisher but if you have a book with, say, lots of photos that requires a non-standard layout, it should be noted here.

Who is coordinating the production? This is virtually always handled by the publisher unless you’re doing a packaged book for someone. If you’re working on a document for a company, this is more likely to be someone internal or even you.

How many copies will be produced? This is only relevant if you’re producing a printed book or document, but it’s the kind of information the production coordinator needs to get printing quotes.

How will this be printed? Who’s doing the actual printing, and how? Here’s where you’d mention anything about color separations, photo prep, and so on.

What will the cover art be? Who’s doing the cover art? What requirements for the cover art are there? Again, the publisher almost always handles the cover art, but you may have some input on what it looks like, as well as the inclusion of snipes on the cover and so on.

If you’re doing an ebook or a print-on-demand book, there will be additional production information considerations. For example, ebooks are likely to require special formatting in the file and print-on-demand books may require some additional coding or specifications for a PDF file. Mention that in this section.

Also mention if there are related materials that need to be produced. For example, this project might require a note card on special stock or a DVD inserted in the back of the book. (Publishers tend not to do this much anymore because the additional costs of inserting a CD or DVD are considerable compared to the cost of the book and downloading even huge files is no longer much of an issue thanks to cable modems.)

Documentation plans–Marketing information

The marketing information section answers the “Why?” questions. This section is important for book proposals, but if you’re working on some document for a company, you may not need this section. After all, they know why they want to do this; that’s why you’re working on it.

Why write this book? What need does this book fulfill? Where is the perceived hole in the market that this book will plug? You might have a great idea for a book that sounds like fun, but there has to be an identifiable market need for the book that will motivate people to buy it and read it. Sadly, I’ve proposed a number of books (most of which thankfully did not get picked up) that would’ve been a lot of fun to write but would have been a solution with no matching problem.

What’s the competition like? Even if you’ve got a great idea for a book, it doesn’t do you any good if someone published the same or similar book three months ago. List the books that are currently in print that are or could be competition and why this book is better than any of them, or at least what it offers that they don’t. This may simply be the freshest thing on the market or it might be a book that a publisher can offer in their line to match up with another publisher’s similar lines. Everyone comes out with a new book on Microsoft Word, everyone comes out with a basic cookbook every so often, that sort of thing. (BTW, every author I know does their research for this on Amazon. You can identify sales rank, publication date, and so on. In fact, knowing your competition’s publishers will help you avoid the publishers who have just published a book like you’re like to write.)

What marketing strategies should we use? What marketing strategies are of note for this book? Will this document have any major function as a marketing piece (for example, will this tutorial also be used for a marketing piece to sell new customers on the product)? Fill out whatever may be relevant for marketing information.

Are there special marketing considerations? Are there special marketing considerations, such as product tie-ins, plugs on TV shows, websites, forewords, endorsements? Can you get someone with name recognition to do a back cover quote? Did you go to school with someone famous you’ve kept in touch with? (I was at Reed with Steve Jobs, which sounds cool but in fact I didn’t know him.) What about a cover snipe to show that you’re an award-winning author? An Oprah book club sticker? (Hey, it can be done!)